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Tennis Dan Evans
Is this piece of my cousins story ok?

My cousin is too shy to get this checked out, so i decided to post this on Y!A:

If Sarah Evans and Nicole Paek hadn’t chose to play tennis during gym, they wouldn’t have met and they would not have become best friends. If Latoya Reid hadn’t dropped her books by Dan Oko’s desk in Algebra, would they have dated and become boyfriend and girlfriend? And if I hadn’t walked past Youngstein Private School, dropped my phone, and looked up, I would have never saw the man of my dreams, offering my dream job, handing back my cell phone, and never become their 6th grade teacher.

she needs to sort out her grammar.

“chose” should be “chosen”
“i would have never saw” should be “i would never have seen”

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